tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post1881857853358603707..comments2011-11-24T08:22:53.651-05:00Comments on Creative Karina: Sunday Scribblings #3 - The EndKarinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-39069142767415231742007-09-03T02:02:00.000-04:002007-09-03T02:02:00.000-04:00How often do we play similar games with people aro...How often do we play similar games with people around us? Really enjoyed this.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02515440663113132433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-89386208100274208722007-09-02T22:59:00.000-04:002007-09-02T22:59:00.000-04:00I liked this poem very much. The story you wove so...I liked this poem very much. The story you wove so intricately well.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-73218931464747323912007-09-02T21:06:00.000-04:002007-09-02T21:06:00.000-04:00That had a twisty ending! I especially liked:"plac...That had a twisty ending! I especially liked:<BR/>"places his guitar inside and<BR/>closes it<BR/>He stands to leave, looks straight at me<BR/>And bows.<BR/>The show is over."<BR/><BR/>I thought it was a nameless flirtation until I got to the train, then I thought it was a regular passenger flirtation, then I discover the busker. Still a flirtation, though, isn't it?Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-46592886937049095232007-09-02T12:53:00.000-04:002007-09-02T12:53:00.000-04:00Very nicely done. I like the amount of thought you...Very nicely done. I like the amount of thought you put into this and the descriptions you use make him a very visual character, and a bit mysterious. <BR/><BR/>I was pulled in very quickly.<BR/><BR/>Nicely done,<BR/>~SaoirseAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-1668962492329567982007-09-02T11:30:00.000-04:002007-09-02T11:30:00.000-04:00I like this, there's a certain mystery in the exac...I like this, there's a certain mystery in the exact relationship between the people described.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-7612436875440638532007-09-02T09:06:00.000-04:002007-09-02T09:06:00.000-04:00That feeling when we avoid a stranger all the bein...That feeling when we avoid a stranger all the being aware of him is something we ll face. But how many of us can describe it?<BR/><BR/>Your post does that and more. One very good read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-73715423494228417852007-09-02T03:09:00.000-04:002007-09-02T03:09:00.000-04:00Brilliant. I love this.Brilliant. I love this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com