tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post2206537669578575336..comments2011-11-24T08:22:53.651-05:00Comments on Creative Karina: Writer's Island #'s 13 and 14Karinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-55336592194673166102007-12-13T11:29:00.000-05:002007-12-13T11:29:00.000-05:00And you have the nerve to tell meit didn't mean a ...And you have the nerve to tell me<BR/>it didn't mean a thing?<BR/><BR/>what things mean to things is so personal, and there is not way one can comment about it. I guess when someone says it didn;t mean a thing it is making fool of themselves as they have no clue as to what "Things" mean to othersRamblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04048279856792308653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-88985363448150928092007-12-12T11:05:00.000-05:002007-12-12T11:05:00.000-05:00Lissa, yes, that did make sense. It does have an ...Lissa, yes, that did make sense. It does have an "exhausted" sort of feel to it, doesn't it?<BR/><BR/>tumblewords, thank you. Yeah, unfortunately I think most of us have been there.<BR/><BR/>Paisley, I thank you for your comment, as you know, it gave me some "blogging" inspiration.<BR/><BR/>Frances, maybe I'll have to do an audio post one of these days reciting one of my poems. ;-)<BR/><BR/>UL, thank you, indeed, hard to regain.<BR/><BR/>Julia, thank you, that might actually be my favorite line as well.<BR/><BR/>Greggo, thanks.<BR/><BR/>Jo, thank you, but as I stated in my longer post (on my other blog), this was not so much personal as fiction based on past experiences.Karinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-4087709228180379102007-12-12T01:12:00.000-05:002007-12-12T01:12:00.000-05:00wow, indeed, this is very well done, not a word to...wow, indeed, this is very well done, not a word too many, taut, emotional, hard-hitting. And I'm sorry......that's hard.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-79350907611425119742007-12-12T00:50:00.000-05:002007-12-12T00:50:00.000-05:00wow, very powerful statement.wow, very powerful statement.Greggohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14513431229566322384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-40556068604366420072007-12-12T00:21:00.000-05:002007-12-12T00:21:00.000-05:00'and in an instantyou broke us'Excellent, Karina!'and in an instant<BR/>you broke us'<BR/><BR/>Excellent, Karina!Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-28877448338007731432007-12-11T22:10:00.000-05:002007-12-11T22:10:00.000-05:00broken moment, broken promise..both hard to regain...broken moment, broken promise..both hard to regain, hard to forget. Beautifully crafted. Thanks.<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://ul-typingaway.blogspot.com/" REL="nofollow">UL</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-53415579514076677182007-12-11T21:57:00.000-05:002007-12-11T21:57:00.000-05:00I love the question and answer at the end.I can pr...I love the question and answer at the end.<BR/>I can practically hear you reciting the poem in my mind.<BR/>Funny I dont know what your voice sounds like but I bet it sounds close to what I am imagining.<BR/>Sending bloglove,<BR/>FrancesAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-71996905809721670582007-12-11T19:56:00.000-05:002007-12-11T19:56:00.000-05:00i cannot imagine it could possibly have erased tru...i cannot imagine it could possibly have erased true love... it may have dimmed it or marred it,,, but if the love you had for him was true... you would still have it.. <BR/><BR/>just my opinion of course... <BR/><BR/>the poem itself was wonderful,, i just wonder about the validity of the societal sentiment.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-34216590338492942382007-12-11T14:58:00.000-05:002007-12-11T14:58:00.000-05:00Nicely poemed - I've been there, too.Nicely poemed - I've been there, too.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3621580205629274097.post-13615962375170708532007-12-11T11:16:00.000-05:002007-12-11T11:16:00.000-05:00I like it. Almost like a conversation where the gi...I like it. Almost like a conversation where the girl/guy fires off her/his emotions but show only enough to justify her/his feelings. Am I making sense?lissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570noreply@blogger.com