Thursday, September 25, 2008

Pensieve's Poetic License #10- Autumn Cinquain

This month's theme for PPL is Autumn, and the form is a Cinquain. You can get all the details at Pensieve's by clicking the button above. I just realized this morning it was TODAY so I quickly threw the following two's much more "pleasant" than the other...

The first:

barren, empty
Falling, dropping, flying
The leaves make their exit

And the nicer one:

Oranges, reds
Changing, coloring, enhancing
God paints us a beautiful picture

Copyright 2008 - Karina
Thanks for dropping in, and before you go, won't you PLEASE read this post, I'm starting a new meme myself - Poetry AND Photography all rolled into one and I'd LOVE LOVE LOVE it if you'd help me launch it. Pretty please??


PastorMac's Ann said...

I'm really enjoying these poems today. Yours are great.

Peculiar said...

Karina, you think the second one was nicer than the first? I think you did a fantastic job on both. They paint such a beautiful picture. I'm glad Robin chose Autumn as a theme. So many great ways to write about it. I guess I'll try my hand at this meme later tonight.

Robin (PENSIEVE) said...

You know I had to WORK to get mine written, and these fell off your fingers with ease. N i c e. I have to agree--while the first conveys "mood", the second one is "how" I think about the season.

Well done (& I'll check out your new meme...just not sure when I'll get it :) ).

Karmyn R said...

I really like the first one - I suppose because that is how I view Fall myself.

Amber (Imperishable Beauty) said...

I see we both have a thing for fall colors. :) I like it, I like it a lot! :)

Anonymous said...

I actually love the first one! My favorite season is autumn, and for me it's beauty and new beginnings. But I do love to be jolted out of complacency, and your first one does that for me!

Great job!

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